A Dab of Prose/Poetry
- tclimer4
- May 20, 2023
- 2 min read
In honor of just finishing the novel The Chilean Poet by Alejandro Zambra (which I will review in a post very soon), I would like to share two pieces of prose/poetry I wrote from my collection of writings about smells. I am not sure if these are considered prose or poetry, but if anyone would like to let me know or tell me which category these fit into, please do.
The Beach on a Hot Sunny Day (date unknown, 2023)
The smell of salt that is slightly fishy coming in
from the breee and waves is unlike any other.
It isn't exactly a pleasant smell, but paired with
the sounds of the waves from the ocean, feeling the
sand beneath your feet and the hot sun hitting your
skin; you are immediately relaxed.
The hints of coconut and other tropical fruits hits
your nose as you lather in the sunscreen. As you lay
down on your back on a beach towel to work on your tan,
you notice even the sand itself hase a scent of its own.
The softness with some grittiness of it combined
with the fishy saltiness coming from the ocean reminds
you of the smell of sex. In that regard laying
on a beach in the sun with all these smells is in a
sense a kind of aphrodisiac; it doesn't matter if you
like it or not, it just works that way.
Coffee (January 11, 2023)
The color of mahogany wood comes
to mind when thinking about the aroma of coffee.
The deep brown with a hint of red that gives
a sense of strength and power.
It lets you know that what you are about to drink
will empower you and lift you from a state of dour.
In the morning, this aroma of energy tells
you that it's time to start your day, get a move on,
sieze the day!
In the afternoon, it can help keep a nap at bay.
And at night, when all is dark, the smell reminds
you that much can still be done because "who needs
sleep?" as some like to say.
Like a good friend or a lover whose scent of their cologne
or perfume you cannot forget and you associate with
love, comfort, and warmth, so is the rich aroma
of coffee.
Even those who do not like the bitter taste of
coffee, can appreciate its one of a kind fragrance
that exudes confidence and resolve in its boldness.
You can't help but want to share these same attributes
as you breathe in this deep scent.
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